Thursday homework

2022-12-09 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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Q: Does eating chocolate change a person’s mood or feelings? A: I think a person\'s mood or feelings can be changed by eating chocolate. Usually, people like a sweet thing, so if a person eats a chocolate, then the person\'s mood or feelings would be better. Also, there are a lot of sugar in chocolate, so it can make a person\'s brain work more smoothly.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I think a person\'s mood or feelings can be changed by eating chocolate.

>> CORRECT!
Usually, people like a sweet thing, so if a person eats a chocolate, then the person\'s mood or feelings would be better.

>> Usually, people like sweet food, so if a person eats a chocolate, then the person\'s mood or feelings would be better.
Also, there are a lot of sugar in chocolate, so it can make a person\'s brain work more smoothly.

>> CORRECT!

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