Thursday homework

2023-02-11 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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Q: If you had the power to stop and restart time, when would you use it? A: I think I\'ll use the power when I\'m almost late to the school. Not usually, but sometimes, some teachers scold the student who are late to school very hard so I shouldn\'t late to school. And also, I would use it when I want to look something closer.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I think I\'ll use the power when I\'m almost late to the school.

>> I think I\'ll use the power when I\'m almost late to school.
Not usually, but sometimes, some teachers scold the student who are late to school very hard so I shouldn\'t late to school.

>> Not usually, but sometimes, some teachers scold the students who are late to school very hard so I shouldn\'t be late to school.
And also, I would use it when I want to look something closer.

>> Also, I would use it when I want to look at something closer.

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