Thursday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q: Do you think finding your passion is a journey or a destination? Why?
A: I think finding my passion is usually a journey.
If I fail finding my passion, then there could not be enough time to find my job or have my job.
But I think if a person finds his or her passion, then the person can succeed easily.
강사 첨삭
Happy Thursday, [이름]! Well done in answering your homework. Please remain consistent in every good thing you do in class. Keep it up! ^^
~T. ELEA
A: I think finding my passion is usually a journey. If I fail finding my passion, then there could not be enough time to find my job or have my job. But I think if a person finds his or her passion, then the person can succeed easily.
>> I think finding my passion is usually a journey. If I fail to find my passion, then there could not be enough time to find my job or have my job. But I think if a person finds his or her passion, then the person can succeed easily.
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