Thursday homework
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Q: What do you believe are some of the most important traits for success in your desired career field?
A: I think one of the most important trait to success is never giving up.
If I give up early, I can\'t do or succeed in something, so I think the person can\'t never success if a person easily gives up.
And if I also do something hard, I won\'t fail easily.
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A: I think one of the most important trait to success is never giving up. If I give up early, I can\'t do or succeed in something, so I think the person can\'t never success if a person easily gives up. And if I also do something hard, I won\'t fail easily.
>> I think one of the most important traits of success is never giving up. If I give up early, I can\'t succeed in life, so I think a person can\'t ever be successful if a person quickly gives up. And if I also decide something hard, I won\'t fail quickly.
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