Thursday homework.

ESSAY: What do you see is the greatest threat to the environment today? Maybe, I think the greatest threat is global warming. because the demage by global warming is extremely various and serious. ㅠㅠ so For example, a island is flooded. because of global warming, the Antarctic glaciers are gradually melted. As a result, the sea level rises. Actually, It is pretty scaring to see sea level rising. Because I also live in Jeju island. and due to global warming, it is already extremely hot in this summer than last year's summer. I am very hard to bear the heat. If humans lose environment in which they can live, maybe it is the biggest disaster.

Hi there!!!      I agree with you. Global warming is one of the greatest threat to the environment today. So we must also do the best thing we can to minimize the effects of global warming. I rearranged some of your composition to make it look better. Job well done. See you later. ~T.Maria~   ESSAY: What do you see is the greatest threat to the environment today?Maybe, I think the greatest threat is global warming. because the demage by global warming is extremely various and serious. >> I think the greatest threat is global warming because the damage by global warming is extremely various and serious. ㅠㅠ so For example, a island is flooded. because of global warming, the Antarctic glaciers are gradually melted. >> For example, an island is flooded because the Antarctic glaciers are gradually melted due to global warming.  As a result, the sea level rises. >> CORRECTActually, It is pretty scaring to see sea level rising. >> Actually, it is pretty scary to see the sea level rising. Because I also live in Jeju island. and due to global warming, it is already extremely hot in this summer than last year\'s summer. >> Due to global warming, it is already extremely hot  this summer compared to  last year\'s summer here in Jeju Island. I am very hard to bear the heat. >> It is very hard to bear the heat.If humans lose environment in which they can live, maybe it is the biggest disaster. >> If humans lose the evironment in which they can live, maybe it is the biggest disaster. >> If humans lose the environment in which they can live, that would be the biggest disaster ever.