Thursday's Essay

Hi there Debby :) Yup, I will keep up. The vacation isn't far. Actually I'm not familiar to describe words. So when you ask me to explain a sentence or word or main idea of situation, I often have in trouble to speak fluently. But I know it's the best way I can improve my speaking skill, so I always keep trying to do that as possible as I can. Thank you for your good teaching skill. Take care :D <Essay> The development of an econommy can make people's life more abundant. But if it is fast, the price will be highly increased abruptly. Rich people will be ok beacuse of thier property. But many other people will be able to fall in trouble. It depends on how the economy growth is done.

Hi there [이름]^^   Are you excited about the coming vacation?^^ You always do your best and do not worry I know if a student is doing well and I can say that your hard work will bring you to better abilities in English. You have a great start and you can relate your ideas well. I like your answer and I can tell that you have good observation of the economy. It is changing all the time and you are correct that the changes have different effects on the people of the country. Keep it up always. Take care^^   ^^T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you: Hi there Debby :) >> CORRECT >> Hello Debby^^Yup, I will keep up. The vacation isn\'t far.>> CORRECT OR> Yes I will do my best. The vacation is near.Actually I\'m not familiar to describe words. >> Actually I\'m not familiar in describing words. So when you ask me to explain a sentence or word or main idea of situation, I often have in trouble to speak fluently. >> CORRECT OR> When I am asked to define a word or a sentence I have trouble speaking fluently. But I know it\'s the best way I can improve my speaking skill, so I always keep trying to do that as possible as I can. >> But I know it\'s the best way that I can improve my speaking skill, so I always keep trying to do that as much as I could. Thank you for your good teaching skill.>> CORRECT OR> Thank you for teaching me properly.Take care :D >> CORRECTOR> Be very careful.<Essay>The development of an econommy can make people\'s life more abundant. >> CORRECT OR> The economic development of a country can make people\'s life more successful.  But if it is fast, the price will be highly increased abruptly. >>  But if it is fast, the price will increase highly and abruptly.  Rich people will be ok beacuse of thier property. >>  Rich people will be okay because of their property.  But many other people will be able to fall in trouble. >> CORRECT OR> A lot of people might have problems. It depends on how the economy growth is done. >> It depends on how the economy growth is doing.