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"Need You Now"
I heard it after the class. I searched the band's name and I could find it right away. The melody is really good! Thank you for recommending this group. I have to find another songs of this band. While I'm writing this, I'm listening to this "Need You Now". :)
Let's talk tommorow.
Take care X)
<Essay>
I'm good at focusing on one thing. So I can get to a class and I can always find good infornation from there. But it also sometimes becomes drawback in life. While I focus on something, I can barely listen to other person's speak. So It makes my friends feel bad from time to time.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]^^
It\'s nice to know that you likes what I sent you!^^
It\'s nice right and the melody is easy to listen to.^^
I will try to think of more suggestions I can tell you.
Concentration is a good attitude to have but in some cases we focus too much.
Learn to have a lot of ears and make it a point to do many things at the same time too!^^
Like enjoy music and practice pronunciation at the same time!^^
Take care^^
T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you:
\"Need You Now\" I heard it after the class.
>> CORRECT
OR> I listened to \"Need you now\" after we talked.
I searched the band\'s name and I could find it right away.
>> CORRECT
OR> I found the band immediately.
The melody is really good!
>> CORRECT
OR> It sounded really good.
Thank you for recommending this group.
>> CORRECT
OR> I\'m thankful for your recommendation.
I have to find another songs of this band.
>> I have to find other songs of this band.
While I\'m writing this, I\'m listening to this \"Need You Now\". :)
>> CORRECT
OR> I\'m listening to this song while writing to you.Let\'s talk tommorow.Take care X)
>> CORRECT
OR> I will catch up with you tomorrow!^^<Essay>I\'m good at focusing on one thing.
>> CORRECT
OR> I can concentrate on one thing.
So I can get to a class and I can always find good infornation from there.
>> So I can get to a class and I can always find good information from there.
But it also sometimes becomes drawback in life.
>> But it also sometimes becomes a drawback in life.
While I focus on something, I can barely listen to other person\'s speak.
>> While I focus on something, I can barely listen to another person\'s speak.
So It makes my friends feel bad from time to time.
>> CORRECT
OR> It upsets some of my friends sometimes.
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