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2014-07-22 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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"Need You Now" I heard it after the class. I searched the band's name and I could find it right away. The melody is really good! Thank you for recommending this group. I have to find another songs of this band. While I'm writing this, I'm listening to this "Need You Now". :) Let's talk tommorow. Take care X) <Essay> I'm good at focusing on one thing. So I can get to a class and I can always find good infornation from there. But it also sometimes becomes drawback in life. While I focus on something, I can barely listen to other person's speak. So It makes my friends feel bad from time to time.

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Hi there [이름]^^ It\'s nice to know that you likes what I sent you!^^ It\'s nice right and the melody is easy to listen to.^^ I will try to think of more suggestions I can tell you. Concentration is a good attitude to have but in some cases we focus too much. Learn to have a lot of ears and make it a point to do many things at the same time too!^^ Like enjoy music and practice pronunciation at the same time!^^ Take care^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you: \"Need You Now\" I heard it after the class. >> CORRECT OR> I listened to \"Need you now\" after we talked.  I searched the band\'s name and I could find it right away. >> CORRECT OR> I found the band immediately.  The melody is really good! >> CORRECT OR> It sounded really good. Thank you for recommending this group. >> CORRECT OR> I\'m thankful for your recommendation. I have to find another songs of this band. >> I have to find other songs of this band. While I\'m writing this, I\'m listening to this \"Need You Now\". :) >> CORRECT OR> I\'m listening to this song while writing to you.Let\'s talk tommorow.Take care X) >> CORRECT OR> I will catch up with you tomorrow!^^<Essay>I\'m good at focusing on one thing. >> CORRECT OR> I can concentrate on one thing. So I can get to a class and I can always find good infornation from there. >> So I can get to a class and I can always find good information from there. But it also sometimes becomes drawback in life. >> But it also sometimes becomes a drawback in life. While I focus on something, I can barely listen to other person\'s speak. >> While I focus on something, I can barely listen to another person\'s speak. So It makes my friends feel bad from time to time. >> CORRECT OR> It upsets some of my friends sometimes.  

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