tia

2023-03-16 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

학생이 쓴 원문

my life pattern is start the part time job i walk out at 6 o\\\'cldck, early the morning go to screen golf coursr eat Breakfast before l go to work or going to eat at work i to study english i\'m doing english academy and power english l hope to work part-time in another contry and become a cabin crew in another country have a lazy personality, and i\'m trying to fix it i paln to swim[이름]g

강사 첨삭

Hi Tia,

The process of organizing and planning how to divide your time between particular activities and priorities is known as time management. Better habits and increased productivity are among the advantages of time management. Improved time management enables you to plan your time more efficiently, boosts your confidence, and improves your focus.

~Teacher Cathy

 

my life pattern is start the part time job

>> My daily routine begins with a part-time job.

i walk out at 6 o\\\'cldck, early the morning go to screen golf coursr

>> I walk out at 6 o’clock and go to the screen golf course.

eat Breakfast before l go to work or going to eat at work

>> I eat breakfast before I go to work, or I’ll eat the food at work.

i to study English

>> I need to study English.

i\'m doing english academy and power English

>> I study in an English academy and at Power English.

l hope to work part-time in another contry and become a cabin crew in another country

>> I hope to have a part-time job in another country and become a cabin crew.

have a lazy personality, and i\'m trying to fix it

>> I have a lazy personality, and I’m trying to fix it.

i paln to swim[이름]g

>> I plan to swim.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·