tia
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Tia,
An essential factor behind each successful individual is their level of dedication, which means their responsibility towards accomplishing targets and life objectives. I know that you’re tired already because of your job. But you want to go in Australia, right? So, it’s really important to be good in the English language. You need to be dedicated or committed to achieving a particular objective. As your teacher, I want to encourage you to dedicate yourself to studying English. Learning a new language can be challenging, but it can also be a very rewarding experience. By studying English, you are opening up new opportunities for yourself. You will be able to communicate with people from all over the world, travel to new places, and pursue new career paths. To succeed in your English studies, it\'s important to stay motivated and dedicated. Make a commitment to practice your English every day, whether it\'s reading a book, watching a movie, or practicing your speaking skills with a friend or classmate. Remember, it\'s okay to make mistakes. Learning a new language is a process, and it takes time to master. Don\'t be afraid to ask for help or to practice your skills with others. I believe in you and your ability to succeed in your English studies. Keep up the hard work and dedication, and I\'m confident that you will achieve your goals.
~Teacher Cathy
When I come home from work, I lie in bed with the excuse that I am tired.
>>CORRECT
OR>>When I come home from work, I lie in bed because I am tired.
I haven\'t sat at a desk and studied for an hour in a month.
>>In the past month, I have not studied for an hour at my desk.
I couldn\'t control myself, so I decided.
>>Do you mean: I couldn\'t control myself to sleep so I decided to do something.
When you wake up, put the mattress upright.
>>CORRECT
OR>> Set the mattress on its side when you get up.
When I come home or after Power English, I think I should lie down in bed for a while and not lie down.
>>Do you mean: I feel like I should stay in bed for a while after Power English or when I get home.
Next month, I hope I will study in moderation on my own.
>>CORRECT
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