Tigers future
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강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Let\'s pray that these athletes will stay with KIA Tigers.
This will make them number 1 again next year. ^^
Thank you for telling me about this.
Have a good night!
_Teacher Dianne ^^
KIA Tigers was at rank 1.So,next year KIA Tigers have to construct Dynasty.
>> The baseball team KIA Tigers was at rank 1, so next year KIA Tigers has to build a dynasty.
KIA Tigers had a contract with KIA Tigers original president for 3years.And KIA Tigers have to contract with Kim Joo Chan,Im [Name] Yong,Yang Hyeon Jong,Hecter,Bernadina,Petdin.
>> KIA Tigers had a contract with the KIA Tigers\' original president for 3 years and the athletes Kim Joo Chan, Im [Name] Yong, Yang Hyeon Jong, Hector, Bernadina, and Pethidin have to renew their contract with KIA Tigers.
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