TikTok and Samsung Lions
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1. What are the latest trends in your country?
>>>People likes TikTok challenge. We especially follow famous IDOL\'s dance challenge. when I was a big fan of TWICE, if new album is released, I have listened to their all songs in album including non-title tracks. I listened to song \"Look at me\" at that time. but now days, because of TikTok challenge, this song is revival. It is the lastest TikTok trend song. So I feel so amazed because I listened this song 6 years ago when it was not famous.
2. What’s the latest news?
>>> The baseball team \"Samsung lions\" is supported by Daegu. And I naturally had been a fan of theirs. But the \"Samsung lions\" has a bad news at 2016. So I don\'t have had a interst since 2016. But last saturday, My girlfriend and me went to \"Samsung lions park\" that is baseball stadim for \"Samsung lions\". And I felt extremely interested in new line-up of \"Samsung lions\" that was different with a team I had knew. The lastest news is that lions won last match
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Hello, Brian!
It sounds like you had quite the experience at the Samsung Lions Park! It\'s fascinating how a change in lineup can reignite interest in a team. Looks like the Lions are back on track with their recent victory!
~ Teacher Maxine
People likes TikTok challenge. We especially follow famous IDOL\'s dance challenge.
>> People like TikTok challenges, especially those featuring famous idols\' dance challenges.
when I was a big fan of TWICE, if new album is released, I have listened to their all songs in album including non-title tracks.
>> When I was a big fan of TWICE, whenever a new album was released, I listened to all their songs, including the non-title tracks.
I listened to song \"Look at me\" at that time. but now days, because of TikTok challenge, this song is revival.
>> I listened to the song \"Look at Me\" during that time, but nowadays, because of the TikTok challenge, this song is experiencing a revival.
It is the lastest TikTok trend song. So I feel so amazed because I listened this song 6 years ago when it was not famous.
>> It\'s the latest TikTok trend song, so I\'m amazed because I listened to this song six years ago when it wasn\'t famous.
The baseball team \"Samsung lions\" is supported by Daegu. And I naturally had been a fan of theirs. But the \"Samsung lions\" has a bad news at 2016. So I don\'t have had a interst since 2016.
>> The baseball team \"Samsung Lions\" is supported by Daegu, and I used to be a fan of theirs naturally. However, the \"Samsung Lions\" had bad news in 2016, so I lost interest.
But last saturday, My girlfriend and me went to \"Samsung lions park\" that is baseball stadim for \"Samsung lions\".
>> But last Saturday, my girlfriend and I went to \"Samsung Lions Park,\" the baseball stadium for the \"Samsung Lions.\"
And I felt extremely interested in new line-up of \"Samsung lions\" that was different with a team I had knew.
>> I found myself extremely interested in the new lineup of the \"Samsung Lions,\" which was different from the team I knew.
The lastest news is that lions won last match
>> The latest news is that the Lions won their last match.
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