Time
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme: [ESSAY] Do you want to go back in time? Why?
No, I don\'t want to go back in time.
Because I like this moment and my parents and everything.
I don\'t want to go back in time.
I like my everything.
William Somerset Maugham said
\"Life wouldn\'t be worth living if I worried over the future as well as the present.\".
So I don\'t want to go back and I like this moment and everything!
강사 첨삭
Here\'s your edited composition, Clair! Thanks for sending it!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Theme: [ESSAY] Do you want to go back in time? Why?
No, I don\'t want to go back in time. Because I like this moment and my parents and everything.
>> No, I don\'t want to go back in time because I like this moment in my life, and my parents, and everything.
>> or: No, I don\'t want to go back in time because I already like my life as it, with my parents, and everything.
I don\'t want to go back in time. I like my everything.
>> I don\'t want to go back in time. I like everything about my life.
William Somerset Maugham said, \"Life wouldn\'t be worth living if I worried over the future as well as the present.\"
>> correct~~
So I don\'t want to go back and I like this moment and everything!
>> So I don\'t want to go back as I\'m satisfied with my current life.
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