Time for Book

2022-01-14 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

I don\'t have much things to say to busy people, because I am not sure if I can say something about them. However, I have one thing that I can say in confidence. There should be time to read a book in life. By reading books, they can help their life or solve problems. If there\'s no time for a book, then they should really quit some of their things.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I don\'t have much things to say to busy people, because I am not sure if I can say something about them.

>> I don\'t have much things to say to busy people, because I am not sure if I can say something to them.
However, I have one thing that I can say in confidence.

>> CORRECT!
There should be time to read a book in life.

>> CORRECT!
By reading books, they can help their life or solve problems.

>> By reading books, they can help themselves in life or solve problems.
If there\'s no time for a book, then they should really quit some of their things.

>> If there\'s no time for a book, then they should really quit some of the things they\'re doing.

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