Time is gold.(1)

2020-01-29 · 첨삭 강사 Eve

학생이 쓴 원문

Time is gold. Many people know its mean and they sometimes add this; The rich can buy wealth and honor, but they can’t buy their time. This lesson tells us that we should spend our time carefully. Because we don\'t have enough power to turn back the clock. I’d like to interpret this lesson in my own way. When I was a high school student, many teachers usually cited it. It’s because they wanted to motivate us. I thought “Time is gold” means that we have to study hard because we don\'t have enough time to study. However, these days my thought has changed. I have some time to do other things except studying for exams. I slept or watched Youtube clips all day for a few weeks. It was great, but I started regretting it. It would be better for me to experience and learn new things.

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Time is gold.

>> Correct!

Many people know its mean and they sometimes add this; The rich can buy wealth and honor, but they can’t buy their time.

>> Many people know its meaning and they sometimes add this, \"The rich can buy wealth and honor, but they can’t buy their time.\"

This lesson tells us that we should spend our time carefully. Because we don\'t have enough power to turn back the clock.

>> This lesson tells us that we should spend our time carefully, because we don\'t have enough power to turn back the clock.
 I’d like to interpret this lesson in my own way.

>> Correct!

When I was a high school student, many teachers usually cited it.

>> Correct!

It’s because they wanted to motivate us.

>> Correct!

I thought “Time is gold” means that we have to study hard because we don\'t have enough time to study.

>> Correct!
 However, these days my thought has changed.

>> Correct!

I have some time to do other things except studying for exams.

>> Correct!

I slept or watched Youtube clips all day for a few weeks.

>> I usually sleep and watch Youtube clips all day for a few weeks.

It was great, but I started regretting it.

>> Correct!

It would be better for me to experience and learn new things.

>> Correct!

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