Time is gold(2)
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Thank you so much for this very enlightening essay of yours, [이름].
Time is precious, it\'s a treasure that only we have.
It\'s our choice whether to give it away to useless or useful things, to people who lifts us up or brings us down.
It\'s something that we can never turn back, like what you said.
It connects to the question, \"does everything I do worth it for my time?\"
So for your question, I would answer it like that.
Great composition, as always.
~Teacher Eve.
Therefore, I promise to go to library every night with my friend.
>> Therefore, I promise to go to the library every night with my friend.
I’d like to study politics through reading books.
>> I’d like to study politics by reading books.
Because for me, “Time is gold” means “Time gives us golden experience.”
>> Correct!
I don’t have much free time after this vacation.
>> Correct!
For this reason, I still love watching Netflix more than traveling, but I will go abroad for my golden time.
>> For this reason, I still love watching Netflix more than traveling, but I will go to abroad for my golden time.
I will study rather than sleep all day for becoming a nice university student.
>> I will study rather than sleep all day to becoming a nice university student.
Time is gold.
>> Correct!
These three words include various meanings. For you, what does it mean?
>> Correct!
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