time is gold

2020-02-03 · 첨삭 강사 Eve

학생이 쓴 원문

The time left for me is not forever when I was young I thought time is too slow and now my [이름]d has changed The time that I can do more something is too good to miss

강사 첨삭

HAPPY MONDAY!

Thank you so much for answering your homework for today. 

I guess, in conclusion, from your essay, we have to treat our time preciously.    

I\'m looking forward to talking to you in class today.

~Teacher Eve.

The time left for me is not forever

>> The time that is left for me is not forever.
 when I was young I thought time is too slow

>> When I was young I though the time is too slow.
 and now my [이름]d has changed 

>> And now, my thinking has changed.     
The time that I can do more something is too good to miss

>> The time that I can do anything is too good and I miss it.

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