"Time is money." Do you agree or disagree? Why?

2017-01-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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"Time is money " means time is important like money. And I agree that. Because Time is moving on and I can't grab it. As I get older, now I miss my childhood when I studied and hung out with my friends and I realize that I can't change my fast and decision. So I think that we need to live today as a last day of my life to not regret and should take lots of picture to remember good things. In that reason, I like to experience new things. And a literal meaning of "Time is money" make sense. when we have time, we can work and make money. sometimes people confuse that what it is more important in life. Especially in our country, people think that money is most important thing and they can do anything with money. It makes our country as a hell. We know that we need money for living. But it is not everything. We should recognize that when people die, they recall the good memory and someone who was with me that time.

강사 첨삭

Good morning Kim!

Time really flies so fast, so we should enjoy and treasure every moment of it with our loved ones. Thank you for sparing some of your time to do your homework. Have a great day ahead! See you in class.

~Kelly^^

\"Time is money \" means time is important like money.

>> Correct. 
 And I agree that. 

>> And I agree to that.
Because Time is moving on and I can\'t grab it.

>> Correct. 
As I get older, now I miss my childhood when I studied and hung out with my friends and I realize that I can\'t change my fast and decision. 

>> As I get older, I\'m missing my childhood days when I was studying and hanging out with my friends and I realized that I can\'t change my past and the decisions that I have made. 
So I think that we need to live today as a last day of my life to not regret and should take lots of picture to remember good things. 

>> So, I think that we need to live today as if it\'s our last day to not regret and we should take lots of pictures to remember good times. 
In that reason, I like to experience new things.
>> Correct. 
And a literal meaning of \"Time is money\" make sense.

>> And the literal meaning of \"time is money\" makes sense.

when we have time, we can work and make money.
>> W
hen we have time, we can work and make money. 
sometimes people confuse that what it is more important in life.

>> Sometimes, people are confused as to what is important in their life.
Especially in our country, people think that money is most important thing and they can do anything with money.

>> Especially in our country, people think that money is most important and they can do anything with it.

It makes our country as a hell.

>> It makes our country like a hell.

We know that we need money for living.

>> Correct. 

But it is not everything.

>> Correct. 

We should recognize that when people die, they recall the good memory and someone who was with me that time.

>> We should recognize that when people die, they recall the good memories about that person and the people he spent time with.

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