“Time is money.” Do you agree or disagree? Why?
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Time is money. Yes.
Money means that time is as important as it is necessary for our lives.
These days it is connected to money as an hourly wage.
Time is money because everything changes and is made according to time.Money is convenient for humans to survive,
and we use our time to get it.
Looking at money can hurt your health, so you need wisdom to use your time properly.
Money and time are connected as a necessary existence.
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Time is money. Yes.
>>Yes. Time is money.
Money means that time is as important as it is necessary for our lives.
Money means that time is as important as it is necessary for our lives.
>>CORRECT!
These days it is connected to money as an hourly wage.
These days it is connected to money as an hourly wage.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: These days, time is connected to money particularly in the hourly wage.
Time is money because everything changes and is made according to time.
Time is money because everything changes and is made according to time.
>>CORRECT!
Money is convenient for humans to survive, and we use our time to get it.
>>CORRECT!
Looking at money can hurt your health, so you need wisdom to use your time properly.
Looking at money can hurt your health, so you need wisdom to use your time properly.
>>Focusing on getting money can hurt your health, so you need wisdom to use your time properly.
Money and time are connected as a necessary existence.
Money and time are connected as a necessary existence.
>>Money and time are connected because they are necessary for our existence.
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