Time Management
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme: [ESSAY] Do you think you manage your time wisely? Why?
Yes, I think so.
Because I usually plan my schedule on weeks and I do my must-do works and play on weekends too.
And I\'m usually punctual person.
I think I manage my time wisely!
강사 첨삭
Here\'s your edited homework, Clair!
Enjoy your new karaoke mic! Have a good one!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Theme: [ESSAY] Do you think you manage your time wisely? Why?
Yes, I think so. Because I usually plan my schedule on weeks and I do my must-do works and play on weekends too.
>> I think so because I usually plan my weekly schedule and I do my must-do works and play on weekends, too.
And I\'m usually punctual person.
>> And I\'m usually a punctual person.
I think I manage my time wisely!
>> So I believe I manage my time wisely!
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