timeless values
학생이 쓴 원문
We have been lost timeless values so fast in our life like hard work, diligence and perseverance as you mentioned.
The center value of judgement is money and material gain.
Specially the youger generation did not learn about good values and attititude.
I think that is our fault as parents, adults, and social menbers we did not teach them.
The winner are digital medias and material richness instead of timeless values.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ms. [이름]!
Sadly, we are part of our children\'s values. Yes, it takes a village to raise a child, and part of that is how strong our influence on our children is. Nowadays, Most parents rely on the formation of values of their children in school, then blame them (the school) when they are not growing the way they expect their children to be.
See you.
Aki~
We have been lost timeless values so fast in our life like hard work, diligence and perseverance as you mentioned.
>>> We have lost timeless values so fast in our life like hard work, diligence, and perseverance, as you mentioned.
The center value of judgment is money and material gain.
>>> CORRECT!
Specially the youger generation did not learn about good values and attititude.
>>> Especially the younger generation did not learn about good values and attitudes.
I think that is our fault as parents, adults, and social menbers we did not teach them.
>>> CORRECT!
The winner are digital medias and material richness instead of timeless values.
>>> The winners are digital medias and material richness instead of timeless values.
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