Tips on the making air travel more enjoyable.

2021-08-31 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

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I have a some tips for making air travel more enjoyable. Role No, 1 I prepare a foot stuff, Because my foot did\'t approched on the floor (I\'m just 155cm) Role No,2 I wear a long skirt or comportable clothes. It is freely to move or change the position. Role No. 3 I prepare a movie or music without internet connect. Likes youtube music Role No, 4 I take a selfie and edit or take a picture to outside cloud Role No. 5 I clean up my sell-phone storage space ( erase useless photos, videos, APP etc) Role No. 6 I read a book or write a diary or plan to trip. I was repeat role 1 through role 6, i will arrive at the destination. I spend my air travel time like this.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon [이름]!

I guess you really miss travelling :)

I have a some tips for making air travel more enjoyable.

>>> CORRECT!

Role No, 1

>>> Rule No. 1

I prepare a foot stuff, Because my foot did\'t approched on the floor (I\'m just 155cm)

>>> I prepare a foot stuff, because my foot can\'t reach the ground. (I\'m just 155cm)

Role No,2

>>> Rule No. 2

I wear a long skirt or comportable clothes.

>>> I wear a long skirt or a comfortable clothes.

It is freely to move or change the position.

>>> It is freely move or change position.

Role No. 3

>>> Rule No. 3

I prepare a movie or music without internet connect.

>>> I prepare a movie or music without needing the internet.

Likes youtube music

>>> Mostly from YouTube music.

Role No, 4

>>> Rule No. 4

I take a selfie and edit or take a picture to outside cloud

>>> I take selfies and edit it.

Role No. 5

>>> Rule No. 5

I clean up my sell-phone storage space ( erase useless photos, videos, APP etc)

>>> I delete useless photos, videos or APPS from my cellphone.

Role No. 6

>>> Rule No. 6

I read a book or write a diary or plan to trip.

>>> I read a book, write a diary, or plan a trip.

I was repeat role 1 through role 6, i will arrive at the destination.

>>> I repeat the all the rules until I arrive in my destination.

I spend my air travel time like this.

>>> CORRECT!

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