Tired~!!
학생이 쓴 원문
I'm so tired today
I went to social academy, and do my homework!!
Ha... I want to go to bed quickly!!
But I should do my homework now!!
Ha,,, Jin young, Fighting!!!
강사 첨삭
Were you able to get some rest? I hope you have. I was able to rest well too. I\'m looking forward to our class. Talk to you soon!
T. Meg
I\'m so tired today
>>I\'m so tired today. (Don\'t forget your punctuation mark.)I went to social academy, and do my homework!!
>>I went to my Social Academy and did my homework!Ha... I want to go to bed quickly!!>>Ha! I want to go to bed as soon as possible.
But I should do my homework now!!>>Correct!
Ha,,, Jin young, Fighting!!!
>>Ha! Jin Young, fighting!
>>Ha! Jin Young, keep fighting!
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