tired..

2013-08-22 · 첨삭 강사 Giselle

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Good evening teacher!! Today weather is bad. I don't like and i feel bad. Oh.. I have a question. My mom asked me "a foreigner have something. But a foreigner lost this. So a person find a foregner. A person asked him or her. Then what a person say for him or her?" And i answer my teacher. What i answer my mom? Oh i am tired but only tomorrow should go to school and finish week. So happy. Then we will see today class~~

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!! Thank you for sharing about your mom\'s question today. Here is the question again, \"Is this thing yours?\" I know your mom will be very proud of you because you tried to help her with this. Please review the corrections below. See you tomorrow!! ~ T. Giselle ^_^   Good evening teacher!!>> Correct! Today weather is bad. >> Today\'s weather is bad. I don\'t like and i feel bad. >> I don\'t like it and I feel bad. Oh.. I have a question.>> Correct! My mom asked me \"a foreigner have something. But a foreigner lost this. >> My mom told me that a foreigner lost something. So a person find a foregner. >> Then one person found this thing. A person asked him or her. >> This person wants to ask the foreigner if he owns the item. Then what a person say for him or her?\" >> How is this person going to ask the foreigner? And i answer my teacher. >> I told my mom that I will ask my teacher about it. What i answer my mom? >> What will I tell my mom? Oh i am tired but only tomorrow should go to school and finish week. >> Oh I am tired but I only have tomorrow to go to school and then the week is finished. So happy. >> I am so happy. Then we will see today class~~ >> I will see you in class later.~~

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