tired..
학생이 쓴 원문
Good evening teacher!!
Today weather is bad. I don't like and i feel bad.
Oh.. I have a question.
My mom asked me "a foreigner have something. But a foreigner lost this. So a person find a foregner. A person asked him or her. Then what a person say for him or her?" And i answer my teacher. What i answer my mom?
Oh i am tired but only tomorrow should go to school and finish week. So happy. Then we will see today class~~
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!!
Thank you for sharing about your mom\'s question today.
Here is the question again, \"Is this thing yours?\"
I know your mom will be very proud of you because you tried to help her with this.
Please review the corrections below.
See you tomorrow!!
~ T. Giselle ^_^
Good evening teacher!!>> Correct!
Today weather is bad.
>> Today\'s weather is bad.
I don\'t like and i feel bad. >> I don\'t like it and I feel bad.
Oh.. I have a question.>> Correct!
My mom asked me \"a foreigner have something. But a foreigner lost this.
>> My mom told me that a foreigner lost something.
So a person find a foregner.
>> Then one person found this thing.
A person asked him or her.
>> This person wants to ask the foreigner if he owns the item.
Then what a person say for him or her?\"
>> How is this person going to ask the foreigner?
And i answer my teacher.
>> I told my mom that I will ask my teacher about it.
What i answer my mom? >> What will I tell my mom?
Oh i am tired but only tomorrow should go to school and finish week.
>> Oh I am tired but I only have tomorrow to go to school and then the week is finished.
So happy.
>> I am so happy.
Then we will see today class~~
>> I will see you in class later.~~
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