tiring week

2010-10-04 · 첨삭 강사 abby

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hello lei~ Last week I was so tired. I had to so many work and part time job and besides I had to go wedding saturday and next day. Fortunately sunday's wedding was finished early. So I could take a rest happily. I thought a marriage whole weekend because of atteding the two weddings. Why many people would not live alone? just for stability? just for a baby? In my case, I have a dream leading a happy marriage. Because I think that is a copmpletion of my life. So I [이름]der if I have a happy marriage.

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Hi J!!! Thank you for passing this one. It really caught my attention. I think every girl dreams to be married someday and have their own family. And each girl fancies a great wedding. ^^ Take care girl!! See you on Monday!!! Lei J   hello lei~>>correctLast week I was so tired.>>correctI had to so many work and part time job and besides I had to go wedding saturday and next day.>>I did so many works and a part time job and besides, I had to attend a wedding ceremony on Saturday and Sunday. Fortunately sunday's wedding was finished early.>>Fortunately, Sunday's wedding ceremony finished early.So I could take a rest happily.>>correctI thought about marriage the whole weekend because of atteding the two weddings.>>correctWhy many people would not live alone?>>correctjust for stability? just for a baby?>>correct >> Is it just for stability or just for a baby? (better)In my case, I have a dream leading to a happy marriage.>>correctBecause I think that is a completion of my life.>>correct >>Because I think that will complete my life.So I [이름]der if I will be having a happy marriage.>>correct

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