tiring week
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hello lei~
Last week I was so tired.
I had to so many work and part time job and besides I had to go
wedding saturday and next day.
Fortunately sunday's wedding was finished early.
So I could take a rest happily.
I thought a marriage whole weekend because of atteding the two
weddings.
Why many people would not live alone?
just for stability? just for a baby?
In my case, I have a dream leading a happy marriage.
Because I think that is a copmpletion of my life.
So I [이름]der if I have a happy marriage.
강사 첨삭
Hi J!!! Thank you for passing this one. It really caught my attention. I think every girl dreams to be married someday and have their own family. And each girl fancies a great wedding. ^^ Take care girl!! See you on Monday!!!
Lei J
hello lei~>>correctLast week I was so tired.>>correctI had to so many work and part time job and besides I had to go wedding saturday and next day.>>I did so many works and a part time job and besides, I had to attend a wedding ceremony on Saturday and Sunday.
Fortunately sunday's wedding was finished early.>>Fortunately, Sunday's wedding ceremony finished early.So I could take a rest happily.>>correctI thought about marriage the whole weekend because of atteding the two weddings.>>correctWhy many people would not live alone?>>correctjust for stability? just for a baby?>>correct
>> Is it just for stability or just for a baby? (better)In my case, I have a dream leading to a happy marriage.>>correctBecause I think that is a completion of my life.>>correct
>>Because I think that will complete my life.So I [이름]der if I will be having a happy marriage.>>correct
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