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Today was hard day. it was kind of a really hard day because my work didn’t go well. so I really cannot understand why I am writing this essay. The reason why I write this van is dead I promised myself that whatever happens and during daytime I write at least one essay to be reviewed. So for this sentence is I spent less than five minutes and surprisingly I am not typing a keyboard I am speaking while I am driving so this will end when I arrived my home. well now I see my apartment so I think I am going to finish this speech right now bye.

Hello Yong,

Thank you for today’s homework!

I appreciate it a lot!

Have a nice day and talk to you later!

Teacher ELLY.

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Today was hard day.

>>Today was a hard day.

It was kind of a really hard day because my work didn’t go well.

CORRECT!

or>>My performance at work today was a mess, so I sort of had a tough day.

so I really cannot understand why I am writing this essay.

>>So, I really cannot understand why I am writing this essay.

or>>Thus, I don’t really understand myself why I still have the strength to write an essay.

The reason why I write this van is dead I promised myself that whatever happens and during daytime I write at least one essay to be reviewed.

>>The reason why I am writing this is, because I promised myself that whatever happens during the day, I will still write at least one essay to be reviewed.

So for this sentence is I spent less than five minutes and surprisingly I am not typing a keyboard I am speaking while I am driving so this will end when I arrived my home.

>>So, I only spent less than five minutes for these sentences, and surprisingly, I am not typing on a keyboard. I am speaking while I am driving, so I will end this when I arrive home.

well now I see my apartment so I think I am going to finish this speech right now bye. 

>>Well, now I can see my apartment, so I think I am going to finish this speech right now. Bye!