To adapt new business circumstance new changes can\'t avoid.
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> Do you think new changes and new regulations are necessary for a company\'s improvement?
Sure. According to changes of business circumstance company should adapt it. So changes are necessary for company to survive of fast changing circumstance.
Here is an example about it. Nowadays in automotive business restriction of CO2 is getting strict. To adapt this change automotive business also change especially engine type from internal combustion engine to traction electric motor. According to this change most of the automotive OEM developed electric vehicles. According to this change all the supplier also developed components which are proper to electric vehicles.
As you can see in an example adaption is essential to survive in fast changing business circumstance. To adapt new business circumstance new changes can\'t avoid.
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Hello JY! Thank you for this. Yes, change is indeed necessary for improvement and development. Change is constant.
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Sure. According to changes of business circumstance company should adapt it. >>> Sure. According to the changes of business circumstances, the company should adapt to it.
So changes are necessary for company to survive of fast changing circumstance.
>>> So changes are necessary for the company to survive the fast changing circumstances.
Here is an example about it.
>>> Here is an example for it.
Nowadays in automotive business restriction of CO2 is getting strict.
>>> Nowadays, in the automotive business, restriction of CO2 is getting strict.
To adapt this change automotive business also change especially engine type from internal combustion engine to traction electric motor.
>>> To adapt to this change, automotive business also change especially engine type from internal combustion engine to traction electric motor.
According to this change most of the automotive OEM developed electric vehicles.
>>> correct
According to this change all the supplier also developed components which are proper to electric vehicles.
>>> OR: In addition, according to this change, all the suppliers also developed components which are proper for electric vehicles.
As you can see in an example adaption is essential to survive in fast changing business circumstance.
>>> As you can see in an example, adaption is essential to survive in a fast changing business circumstance.
To adapt new business circumstance new changes can\'t avoid.
>>> To adapt to new business circumstances, new changes can\'t be avoided.
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