To Alexia, today's homework

2018-10-10 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Do you prefer to text or talk on the phone? Why? Answer in complete sentences. I prefered to text but now I usually have a conversation on the phone. I think i was so shy that i couldn't stand the situation when I ordered some foods or had to ask something to the government agencies. I feared that it might be misunderstood. But I figured it out that I can't live like this anymore. I should confront what I feared. There's a word I like, 'Practice makes perfect.' I'm not sure that I've completely overcome the unnecessary shyness of deeper inside my mind. Well... some practice 'ameliorated' my interpersonal skills. And talking on the phone with my acquaintances, friends, and my family gives me the unexpected pleasure which might have placed in human nature, sharing lives each other and being at the same moment. Thanks for your kindness during the whole class , even though it was an unpredicted schedule to you.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],

Thank you for doing your homework. ^^ It is okay. Even if it\'s unexpected or unpredicted schedule to have a class with you, I enjoyed it because you are interactive, and it\'s amazing. ^^ Thank you.

HOMEWORK:

Do you prefer to text or talk on the phone? Why?
Answer in complete sentences.

YOUR ANSWER:

I prefered to text but now I usually have a conversation on the phone. I think i was so shy that i couldn\'t stand the situation when I ordered some foods or had to ask something to the government agencies.
I feared that it might be misunderstood. But I figured it out that I can\'t live like this anymore. I should confront what I feared. There\'s a word I like, \'Practice makes perfect.\' I\'m not sure that I\'ve completely overcome the unnecessary shyness of deeper inside my mind.
Well... some practice \'ameliorated\' my interpersonal skills. And talking on the phone with my acquaintances, friends, and my family gives me the unexpected pleasure which might have placed in human nature, sharing lives each other and being at the same moment.
Thanks for your kindness during the whole class , even though it was an unpredicted schedule to you.

CORRECTIONS:

I preferred to text but now I usually have a conversation on the phone. I think I was so shy that I couldn\'t stand the situation when I ordered some foods or had to ask something to the government agencies.
I feared that it might be misunderstood. But I figured out that I can\'t live like this anymore. I should confront what I feared about. There\'s a word I like, \'Practice makes perfect.\' I\'m not sure that I\'ve completely overcome the unnecessary shyness deep inside my mind.
Well... some practice \'ameliorated\' my interpersonal skills. And talking on the phone with my acquaintances, friends, and my family give me the unexpected pleasure which might have placed in human nature, sharing lives with each other and being at the same moment.

** Hi [이름], well done. ^^ You have just few grammar slips. Please take note of the corrections.

Take care. ^^

T. Alexia

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