To Alice
학생이 쓴 원문
Happy birthday Alice.
god bless you on this year.
I am really happy with your birth although We known each other a few time.
I think It's not a big deal.
Unfortunately, Today is our last day until I start the lesson again.
But I'm sure I can take the lesson next time with you.
I will be looking forward for that.
Hm....I don't know what to say next word.
Just have a nice day!!!
From Johnny
강사 첨삭
Hi Johnny!
I am really saddened to know that it is our last day today. We only spent a very short time having classes together but it was really worthwhile. I will surely miss you.
Anyway, I know that you will go a long way. I\'m glad that you became my student. Hope to talk to you again soon, Sir!
Enthusiastically,
~Teacher Alice
Happy birthday Alice.
>> Correct! *Thanks Mr. [Name]!god bless you on this year.
>> God bless you on this year.I am really happy with your birth although We known each other a few time.
>> I am really happy with about your birthday although we have only known each other for a short time.I think It\'s not a big deal.
>> I think it\'s not a big deal.Unfortunately, Today is our last day until I start the lesson again.
>> Unfortunately, today is our last day until I start the lesson again.But I\'m sure I can take the lesson next time with you.
>> But I\'m sure I can take the lesson with you next time. I will be looking forward for that.
>> I will be looking forward to that.Hm....I don\'t know what to say next word.
>> Hm....I don\'t know what next word to say.Just have a nice day!!!
>> Correct!From Johnny
>> Correct!
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