To Be 20 Years Old

2024-02-08 · 첨삭 강사 Ara

학생이 쓴 원문

I think 20 is the best age to be. It\'s because I can do anything without parent\'s interference when I am 20. Also, I can buy something more. However, there are some weaknesses. We should find a job to earn money for our future. And we should do everything on our own. So, I want to be 20 years old, but I am afraid of to be.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], well done on completing your homework. Here are the corrections for clarity and to ensure correct grammar. I hope they help.

Sincerely,

^^ T. Ara

I think 20 is the best age to be.

>>> CORRECT!

It\'s because I can do anything without parent\'s interference when I am 20.

>>> It\'s because I can do anything without my parents\' interference when I am 20.
Also, I can buy something more.

>>> Also, I can buy more things.
However, there are some weaknesses.

>>> CORRECT!
We should find a job to earn money for our future.

>>> CORRECT!
And we should do everything on our own.

>>> CORRECT!
So, I want to be 20 years old, but I am afraid of to be.

>>> So, I want to be 20 years old, but I am afraid to be.

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