To be ambitious
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I don\'t know exactly how much ambition is good or excessive? I think that \'Golden mean\'is very important and kind of wisdom which our seniors have stressed. It is not easy to keep balanced between being ambitious and being greedy. Being content with current situations, trying to improve and progress is good attitude. But complaining about current situations makes us down and we can\'t exert our energy or effort to proceed.
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Hi, Gi [이름]!
I agree with what you mentioned; the \'Golden Mean\' is very important to keep our lives balanced and to avoid being too ambitious or too complacent. Have a great weekend with your daughters and niece!
- T. Caitlyn
I don\'t know exactly how much ambition is good or excessive?
>> I don\'t know exactly how much ambition is good or excessive.
I think that \'Golden mean\'is very important and kind of wisdom which our seniors have stressed.
>> I think the \'Golden Mean\' is very important, a kind of wisdom that our seniors have stressed.
It is not easy to keep balanced between being ambitious and being greedy.
>> It is not easy to maintain a balance between being ambitious and being greedy.
Being content with current situations, trying to improve and progress is good attitude.
>> Being content with current situations, and trying to improve and progress is a good attitude.
But complaining about current situations makes us down and we can\'t exert our energy or effort to proceed.
>> CORRECT
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