to be continued

2010-10-08 · 첨삭 강사 lei

학생이 쓴 원문

To make a blow (don’t know the English name) with it, the girls should empty it like a balloon with fingering enough to pull carefully its all contents out through its narrow hole without tearing at all. If we successfully had done it, we could enjoy blowing it inside our mouth making sounds like a frog’s croaking. If the small mouth of the ball were torn, it became useless because it couldn’t make sound even though we blew it. So chinese lanterns were very popular to girls at that time before man-made gum blows were produced. When I was absorbed in enjoying blowing this and croaking, my grandma scared me saying that the sounds would tempt snakes, so I quit blowing them. the work of making a blow required a lot of our dexterity. my dearest childhood never comes again!

강사 첨삭

To make a blow (don’t know the English name) with it, >>correct the girls should empty it like a balloon with fingering enough to pull carefully its all contents out >> the girls should empty it like a balloon, pulling out all it's contents carefully using our fingers. through its narrow hole without tearing at all. >> through its narrow hole without tearing the fruit/skin at all. If we successfully had done it, we could enjoy blowing it inside our mouth making sounds like a frog’s croaking. >>If we've done it successfully, we could enjoy blowing it inside our mouth making sounds like a frog’s croaking. If the small mouth of the ball were torn, it became useless because it couldn’t make sound even though we blew it. >>correct So chinese lanterns were very popular to girls at that time before man-made gum were produced. >>correct When I was absorbed enjoying blowing this and croaking, my grandma scared me saying that the sounds would tempt snakes, >>correct so I quit blowing them. >>correct the work of making a blow required a lot of our dexterity. >>correct my dearest childhood never comes again! >>correct

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