to be continued

Japanese government announced that the Korean young guys voluntarily did those things through their patriotism toward Japan though; actually they were forced to do it by Japanese government. Our young generation at that time were totally stamped out by their brutal force. nevertheless they didn’t give enough apologies or compensations to our country yet, while the German government and people had fully apologized for their mistakes right after the end of the World War II. Besides, they are still lingering to return our historical royal documents which they illegally moved them to Japan during their colonization. I cannot understand what their mind set is and why they are so eager to hold the property of other's not of their owns. japan is a tricky country in the world, isn't it?

Hi Ms. [Name]!

Looking through our Philippine history, I can see that both of our countries have been to difficult times with the hands of our colonizers. It was a blessing in disguise that we were able to gain our freedom although it took several years.

Anyway, I have included here your corrected composition. ^^, I hope this helps for your further improvement.

Take care,