To be healthy
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I have tried many things to stay healthy. First, I have kept eating healthy. If it is possible, I try to fresh food produced in my vegetable garden or in local. And I try not to eat any frozen foods or dishes with much seasoning. Three years ago, I stopped eating red meat such as beef or pork. So far I am still keeping my food habit as a pollotarian. Secondly, I do exercises consistently. Recently I began doing flying yoga along with phillatis. And I climb mountains with my husband. Lastly, I try to take a rest and relieve some stress or pressure .And I try to have fun or interesting experiences like traveling.
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I have tried many things to stay healthy. First, I have kept eating healthy.
>> I\'ve tried everything to keep healthy.
First, I have kept eating healthy.
>>First and foremost, I have maintained a healthy diet.
First, I have kept eating healthy.
>>First and foremost, I have maintained a healthy diet.
If it is possible, I try to fresh food produced in my vegetable garden or in local.
>> Correct!
OR: If possible, I aim to eat fresh food grown in my vegetable garden or locally.
And I try not to eat any frozen foods or dishes with much seasoning.
>> Correct!
Three years ago, I stopped eating red meat such as beef or pork.
>> Correct!
So far I am still keeping my food habit as a pollotarian.
>> So far, I have maintained my pollotarian eating habits.
Secondly, I do exercises consistently.
>> Correct!
Recently I began doing flying yoga along with phillatis.
>> I recently started performing flying yoga with pilates
And I climb mountains with my husband.
>> And I go mountain climbing with my husband.
Lastly, I try to take a rest and relieve some stress or pressure .
>> Correct!
And I try to have fun or interesting experiences like traveling.
>> And I aim to have enjoyable or exciting experiences, such as traveling.
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