To be old, aging

Hi there [이름],

An amazing Monday to you!

When I was young, I want to grow up fast. I wanted to be an adult already so that I can do things I wanted to do which I couldn\'t do back then. But now that I\'m not so young anymore, I wish I could go back to the days when I was still young. As always, you did a great job in your composition. Have a wonderful Monday sir!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

To be old, aging diminishes the body function for men or women.

>>correct

Doctor say that quickness in their sixties is 70 percent lower than that in their 20s.

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Muscal power lose 50%.

>>We lose 50% of muscle power.

The function of brain fall down and the joints get weak, too.

>> The function of the brain goes down and joints get weak too.

Therefore physical strength is fading away.

>>correct

Sadly we must admit that it\'s reality.

>>Sadly, we must admit that\'s the reality.

Aging making all things difficult.

>>Aging make all things difficult.

But it\'s on the positive side.

>> But on the positive side,

Put down the money and the fame.

>>correct grammar

BUT I THINK YOU MEAN>> we could stop worrying about fame and money.

That helps to put my mind at rest.

>>correct

To forget something feels sometimes comfortable.

>>To forget something sometimes feel comfortable.

Throw obsession away, and then it is possible.

>>correct

Aging is a natural phenomenon.

>>correct

Everything is circulated.

>>correct

All people was born and grow and death.

>> All people were born then they grow and then they die.

Aging is promise a rebirth.

>>Aging is a promise of a rebirth.

If you are hard and difficult, you don\'t do that.

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Because you were working hard when you were young.

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OR>> Because you worked hard when you were young,

The old should take a rest, of course. I think so.

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OR Now that you are old, you should rest.

It\'s never sad things.

>>It\'s never a sad thing.

 I am just envious their youth.

>>I am just envious of their youth.