To Blair, a homework from last Monday. What is your motivation to study or come to work every day?
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Hi there, [이름] ^^
Thanks for doing your homework and sharing your story :)
It\'s great to hear that you\'ve found an inspiration in enjoying and studying the English language.
Keep on going :)
When I started to learn English, I just thought it would change my life. My parents divorced and I spent about 5 years without them before I went to school. I was isolated and seperated with my sister. A grandmother, the only one who raised me, was too busy and old to take care of me. She was already over 80. She had to do her jobs to raise me. It must be very tough for her. So, no one seemed to thoughtfully look after my talents, my hobby, or my favorite toys. I was alone and some relatives argued of who was going to raise me. I thought I had to read few books at the moment. Because it was the only time they stopped blaming each other and praised me as if I deserved to be raised. I think I\'ve quite much lived up their expectation. Although it was a sad story, I think i was very lucky. I\'ve found myself who has been interested in learning and I trully enjoy studying English as a result.
When I started to learn English, I just thought it would change my life, my parents divorced and I spent about 5 years without them before I went to school. I was isolated and separated from my sister. A grandmother, the only one who raised me was too busy and old to take care of me. She was already over 80 years old. She had to do her jobs to be able to provide our needs, It must be very tough for her. So no one seemed to thoughtfully look after my talents, hobbies, favorite things and a lot more. I was alone and some relatives argued of who was going to raise me. The only time they stopped arguing is when I read few books and study well. They praised me as if I deserved to be raised. I think I\'ve quite much lived up their expectation. Although it was a sad story, I think i was very lucky. I\'ve found myself who has been interested in learning and I trully enjoy studying English as a result.
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