To change about women\'s marriage
학생이 쓴 원문
-There are many reasons that women don\'t want to getting marriage anymore. Women\'s earning is also one of reasons about that. Also, many women want to get their own job and trying to get their dream. Statue of women is higher than men nowadays. Korea has government department for only women and also We had woman president before. This subject is depends on person and case by case.
Plus, one of the other reason is man and woman can live together without marriage. A few years ago, living without marriage is quite uncommon and sometimes they were blamed. But, it is not anymore. We can live together easily, if we weren\'t got married. Ofcoursely, some people don\'t like this situation and when they meet other person, they asked about experience that you lived someone together.
In my opinion, As time goes by people doesn\'t getting married.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jay! Wonderful views. Thank you so much for sharing. I appreciate the time you spent with it.
When it comes to dating and relationships, everyone has different expectations as far as the future. Some people choose to remain single, some get married, and some are in a romantic relationship for a long time but have no intention of walking down the aisle. There are many reasons why some women don\'t want to get married, from being married to their careers to being married to their freedom. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
>>There are many reasons that women don\'t want to get married anymore.
Women\'s earning is also one of reasons about that.
>>A woman\'s financial capacity is also one of the reasons for that.
Also, many women want to get their own job and trying to get their dream.
>>CORRECT
Statue of women is higher than men nowadays.
>>The status of women is higher now than men these days.
Korea has government department for only women and also.
>>Also, our Korean government has a department for women only.
We had woman president before.
>>We had a woman president before.
This subject is depends on person and case by case.
>>This subject is a case to case basis and also depending on the individual.
Plus, one of the other reason is man and woman can live together without marriage.
>>Plus, one of the other reason is a man and a woman can live together without marriage.
A few years ago, living without marriage is quite uncommon and sometimes they were blamed.
>>A few years ago, living without marriage is quite uncommon and sometimes they were ridiculed.
But, it is not anymore.
>>CORRECT
We can live together easily, if we weren\'t got married.
>>We can easily live together without getting married yet.
Ofcoursely, some people don\'t like this situation and when they meet other person, they asked about experience that you lived someone together.
>>Definitely, some people don\'t like this situation and so if they meet someone, they would always like to know whether that person has lived with someone outside of marriage.
In my opinion, As time goes by people doesn\'t getting married.
In my opinion, As time goes by people doesn\'t getting married.
>>In my opinion, as time goes by, getting married will no longer be popular.
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