To.Christine

2011-03-24 · 첨삭 강사 Christine

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Hello, Christine. I'm very happy to call again. You are so great teacher. I want 10:40 ~ 11:00 class time. but your time is not available. So I choose this time. If you don't have class that time, please let me know that. I want more late class time. I think your class is helpful my listening. I didn't do well last class, But I would like to do my best. Pleas give me a help. I want to speak more fluent english. I assure that I have more good attitude. Have a nice day!

강사 첨삭

 Hi there Lisa!! I’m so glad to see your composition here again!! How was your Thursday?!  I can’t wait to talk to you later!! ~ Chris~ Hello, Christine. >> Correct!I'm very happy to call again. >> I’m very happy to have a phone class again.You are so great teacher. >> You are a great teacher. ^^    ~ Thank you!^^I want 10:40 ~ 11:00 class time. >> I want to have a class between 10:40 to 11:00pm.but your time is not available. >> But you were not available that time.So I choose this time. >> So, I chose this time. OR >> So, I chose our current class time.If you don't have class that time, please let me know that. >> If you don’t have class at that time, please let me know.I want more late class time. >> I want to have class at a later time.I think your class is helpful my listening. >> I think your class will help me with my listening skills.I didn't do well last class, But I would like to do my best.>> I didn’t do well in our last class, but I would like to do my best. Pleas give me a help. >> Please help me.I want to speak more fluent english.>> I want to be able to speak English more fluently. I assure that I have more good attitude.>> I assure you that I will Have a nice day! >> Correct!  

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