To.Christine
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, Christine.
I'm very happy to call again.
You are so great teacher.
I want 10:40 ~ 11:00 class time.
but your time is not available.
So I choose this time.
If you don't have class that time, please let me know that.
I want more late class time.
I think your class is helpful my listening.
I didn't do well last class, But I would like to do my best.
Pleas give me a help.
I want to speak more fluent english.
I assure that I have more good attitude.
Have a nice day!
강사 첨삭
Hi there Lisa!! I’m so glad to see your composition here again!!
How was your Thursday?!
I can’t wait to talk to you later!!
~ Chris~
Hello, Christine.
>> Correct!I'm very happy to call again.
>> I’m very happy to have a phone class again.You are so great teacher.
>> You are a great teacher. ^^
~ Thank you!^^I want 10:40 ~ 11:00 class time.
>> I want to have a class between 10:40 to 11:00pm.but your time is not available.
>> But you were not available that time.So I choose this time.
>> So, I chose this time.
OR >> So, I chose our current class time.If you don't have class that time, please let me know that.
>> If you don’t have class at that time, please let me know.I want more late class time.
>> I want to have class at a later time.I think your class is helpful my listening.
>> I think your class will help me with my listening skills.I didn't do well last class, But I would like to do my best.>> I didn’t do well in our last class, but I would like to do my best.
Pleas give me a help.
>> Please help me.I want to speak more fluent english.>> I want to be able to speak English more fluently.
I assure that I have more good attitude.>> I assure you that I will
Have a nice day!
>> Correct!
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