To day it snowed!!!~~

2015-11-26 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

Today it snowed.It started snowing from the morning to afternoon. Oh how fun it was to play in snow at school. We made a adorable snowman. It was so cold that I had to wore boots,gloves,coat,mask and a hat. Ah!!!~The snow got into my eye! Oh how terrible!!I like winter season the best because I can make a snowman and have a snowfight and I can ride the slide. Most of my class children said that they liked winter season the best. How about you Teacher Mayleen? ~Emma~

강사 첨삭

Hello EMMA! Happy Thursday!^_-   Wow! It snowed there in Korea.^_^ How I wish I can walk in the snow too, make snowballs, etc.:p Here in the Philippines, we only have wet and dry season. It\'s like summer and rainy season. But I stayed abroad for two years where there\'s winter, summer, spring, and autumn. I can say that I like autumn the best because it\'s not hot nor cold. But since it\'ll be Christmas soon, white Christmas is still a fantasy for many Filipinos.   Thank you for this composition, Emma. Be sure to wear warm clothes.^___^ Stay positive. GOOD NIGHT!   =Teacher Mayleen=     Today it snowed. >> CORRECT OR: It started snowing today.   It started snowing from the morning to afternoon. >> It started snowing from morning \'til afternoon. Oh how fun it was to play in snow at school. >> Oh! How fun it was to play in the snow at school!We made a adorable snowman. >> We made an adorable snowman.It was so cold that I had to wore boots,gloves,coat,mask and a hat. >> It was so called that I had to wear boots, gloves, coat, mask, and hat.Ah!!!~The snow got into my eye! >> Ah! The snow got into my eyes! T TOh how terrible!! >> Oh! How terrible! I like winter season the best because I can make a snowman and have a snowfight and I can ride the slide. >> I like winter season because I can make a snowman, have a snowball fight, and ride the slide.Most of my class children said that they liked winter season the best. >> Most of my classmates said the like winter season the best.How about you Teacher Mayleen?>> How about you, Teacher Mayleen?

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