To day it snowed!!!~~
학생이 쓴 원문
Today it snowed.It started snowing from the morning to afternoon.
Oh how fun it was to play in snow at school.
We made a adorable snowman.
It was so cold that I had to wore boots,gloves,coat,mask and a hat.
Ah!!!~The snow got into my eye!
Oh how terrible!!I like winter season the best because I can make a snowman and have a snowfight and I can ride the slide.
Most of my class children said that they liked winter season the best.
How about you Teacher Mayleen?
~Emma~
강사 첨삭
Hello EMMA!
Happy Thursday!^_-
Wow! It snowed there in Korea.^_^ How I wish I can walk in the snow too, make snowballs, etc.:p
Here in the Philippines, we only have wet and dry season. It\'s like summer and rainy season.
But I stayed abroad for two years where there\'s winter, summer, spring, and autumn. I can say that I like autumn the best because it\'s not hot nor cold. But since it\'ll be Christmas soon, white Christmas is still a fantasy for many Filipinos.
Thank you for this composition, Emma. Be sure to wear warm clothes.^___^
Stay positive. GOOD NIGHT!
=Teacher Mayleen=
Today it snowed.
>> CORRECT
OR: It started snowing today.
It started snowing from the morning to afternoon.
>> It started snowing from morning \'til afternoon.
Oh how fun it was to play in snow at school.
>> Oh! How fun it was to play in the snow at school!We made a adorable snowman.
>> We made an adorable snowman.It was so cold that I had to wore boots,gloves,coat,mask and a hat.
>> It was so called that I had to wear boots, gloves, coat, mask, and hat.Ah!!!~The snow got into my eye!
>> Ah! The snow got into my eyes! T TOh how terrible!!
>> Oh! How terrible!
I like winter season the best because I can make a snowman and have a snowfight and I can ride the slide.
>> I like winter season because I can make a snowman, have a snowball fight, and ride the slide.Most of my class children said that they liked winter season the best.
>> Most of my classmates said the like winter season the best.How about you Teacher Mayleen?>> How about you, Teacher Mayleen?
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