To educate my child
학생이 쓴 원문
I let my children wash their body. and I make them clean their room.
First of all I always have been saying them "Don't lie".
I hope that my chidren would become a honest children.
Lastly I have told to them "smile".
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [이름]!
How are you?
I missed talking to you today.
Hope you\'re doing just fine.
Thanks for sending in your homework by the way^^
See you in class tomorrow :)
~Teacher Becca~
Here are some corrections:
I let my children wash their body. and I make them clean their room.
>> I let my children wash up by themselves and make them clean their room.First of all I always have been saying them \"Don\'t lie\".
>> First of all, I always tell them not to lie.I hope that my chidren would become a honest children.
>> I want my children to be honest at all times.Lastly I have told to them \"smile\".
>> Lastly, I told them to smile always.
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