To educate my child

2014-04-29 · 첨삭 강사 Becca

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I let my children wash their body. and I make them clean their room. First of all I always have been saying them "Don't lie". I hope that my chidren would become a honest children. Lastly I have told to them "smile".

강사 첨삭

Hello Mr. [이름]!   How are you? I missed talking to you today. Hope you\'re doing just fine. Thanks for sending in your homework by the way^^ See you in class tomorrow :) ~Teacher Becca~ Here are some corrections:   I let my children wash their body. and I make them clean their room. >> I let my children wash up by themselves and make them clean their room.First of all I always have been saying them \"Don\'t lie\". >> First of all, I always tell them not to lie.I hope that my chidren would become a honest children. >> I want my children to be honest at all times.Lastly I have told to them \"smile\". >> Lastly, I told them to smile always.

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