To everybody, it is important to step back and hav
학생이 쓴 원문
To everybody, it is important to step back and have time for self-reflection.
Sometimes, I think about my childhood, youth time.
I thought that I was an examplary student in my childhood.
At that time, I didn't know anything besides school. home.
But, I spent many time uselessly in my youth time.
At that time, I spent many time in playing with friend, travel, drinking etc.
I spent no useful time.
If I have been in my youth time, I could have spent more useful time.
강사 첨삭
Hello again!
Everyone has their teen moments wherein they make mistakes during their youth…
I know I do.. I made a lot of mistakes before and I also used my time doing useless and pointless things..
But I have learned from those mistakes and they made me stronger the way I am right now…
So if you are going to look back on your childhood, think of the mistakes you made and try to make them right today.. ^_^
See you in class!!
T. Shy
Sometimes, I think about my childhood, youth time.>> Sometimes, I think about my childhood.
>> Sometimes, I think about my life during my youth.
I thought that I was an examplary student in my childhood.>> I thought that I was an exemplary student in my childhood.
At that time, I didn't know anything besides school. home.>> At that time, I didn't know anything besides school and home.
But, I spent many time uselessly in my youth time.>> But, I spent much of my time uselessly in my youth.
At that time, I spent many time in playing with friend, travel, drinking etc.>> Before, I spent much time playing with friend, traveling, drinking etc.I spent no useful time.>> I spent my time uselessly.
If I have been in my youth time, I could have spent more useful time.
>> If I have been in my youth, I could have spent more time wisely.
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