To everybody, it is important to step back and hav

2010-01-18 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

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To everybody, it is important to step back and have time for self-reflection. Sometimes, I think about my childhood, youth time. I thought that I was an examplary student in my childhood. At that time, I didn't know anything besides school. home. But, I spent many time uselessly in my youth time. At that time, I spent many time in playing with friend, travel, drinking etc. I spent no useful time. If I have been in my youth time, I could have spent more useful time.

강사 첨삭

Hello again!   Everyone has their teen moments wherein they make mistakes during their youth… I know I do.. I made a lot of mistakes before and I also used my time doing useless and pointless things.. But I have learned from those mistakes and they made me stronger the way I am right now… So if you are going to look back on your childhood, think of the mistakes you made and try to make them right today.. ^_^ See you in class!!   T. Shy   Sometimes, I think about my childhood, youth time.>> Sometimes, I think about my childhood. >> Sometimes, I think about my life during my youth. I thought that I was an examplary student in my childhood.>> I thought that I was an exemplary student in my childhood. At that time, I didn't know anything besides school. home.>> At that time, I didn't know anything besides school and home. But, I spent many time uselessly in my youth time.>> But, I spent much of my time uselessly in my youth. At that time, I spent many time in playing with friend, travel, drinking etc.>> Before, I spent much time  playing with friend, traveling, drinking etc.I spent no useful time.>> I spent my time uselessly. If I have been in my youth time, I could have spent more useful time. >> If I have been in my youth, I could have spent more time wisely.

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