To Gemma, Today's homework

2018-10-08 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: ESSAY: What do you want most in a friend - someone who is intelligent, or someone who has a sense of humor, or someone who is reliable? Which one of these characteristics is most important to you? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your choice. ANSWER: I think the meaning of being friends each other is like having someone who I can talk to and share something with. So I guess the most important thing is whether he or she can understand me and be willing to share my stories and his or hers. I assume that every meaningful relationships from my family, friends, to my boyfriend, are basically same.

강사 첨삭

Good morning Sunnie~! ^^ Thank you for diligently doing your homework! Take care and see you in class.

>>> TEACHER GEMMA

I think the meaning of being friends each other is like having someone who I can talk to and share something with.

>>>I think the meaning of being friends with each other is like having someone who I can talk to and share something with.

So I guess the most important thing is whether he or she can understand me and be willing to share my stories and his or hers.

>>>CORRECT

I assume that every meaningful relationships from my family, friends, to my boyfriend, are basically same.

>>>I assume that every meaningful relationship from my family, friends, to my boyfriend, are basically the same.

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