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I have a few freckles on my face. I had freckles when i served Military 22 years old because my face was often exposed to sunshine
Strong Sunshine caused skin trouble to people having delicate skin
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-Verna-I have a few freckles on my face.
>>I have few freckles on my face.
I had freckles when i served Military 22 years old because my face was often exposed to sunshine
>> I had freckles when I was 22 years old while I was serving in the military because I was often exposed to sunlight. Strong Sunshine caused skin trouble to people having delicate skin
>> Direct exposure to sunlight causes people to have skin troubles.
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