To homeroom teacher
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Please check the revisions below, [이름] [이름]. I also sent a copy on Skype. :) See you tonight. Cheers, Amanda ^-^
Could you assign Soomin and Soo-hyun to another class when they reach the third grade?
>> Could you assign Soomin and Soo-hyun to another class when they reach third grade?
>> OR: Could you possibly assign Soomin and Soo-hyun to another class when they reach third grade?
I think it would be a good idea to do so to encourage children\'s independence.
>> I think it would be a good idea to do so to encourage the children\'s independence.
>> OR: I think it would be a good idea to do so to encourage the children to be more independent.
My kids cannot go to school on June 29 due to their flight schedule.
>> Correct
My family will stay in the States during their summer break.
>> Correct
Thank you for taking good care of the children during the year.
>> Correct
>> OR: Thank you for taking good care of my children during the school year.
I really appreciate it. Have a great summer.
>> Correct
What does \"5PM ET/2PM PT\" mean, Amanda?
>>> 5PM ET means 5PM Eastern Time / 2PM means Pacific Time. In Korea, we used KST which means Korea Standard Time.
*** The Eastern Time Zone includes the state of Connecticut, Delaware, Florida, Georgia, part of Indiana, part of Kentucky, Maine, Maryland, Massachusetts, Michigan, New Hampshire, New Jersey, New York, North Carolina, Ohio, Pennsylvania, Rhode Island, South Carolina, part of Tennessee, Vermont, Virginia and West Virginia.
*** The Pacific Time Zone includes the states of California, part of Idaho, Nevada, most of Oregon, and Washington. Idaho is in both the Pacific and Mountain Time Zones. View the boundary line between Pacific and Mountain Time Zones.
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