To improve eating habits
학생이 쓴 원문
I am improving my habits as blows.
1. I have changed eating orders that I eat in odds vegetables, protein and carbohydrate food.
2. I eat increased rate protein on the meals.
3. If I eat a lot I will not eat the next meal.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Thomas!
Since you are healthier between the two of us, I totally agree that reviewing the diet plan or meal we take everyday matters a lot in shaping our body and overall health. As we age, our body requires different kinds of nourishment.
Your plan of habit here is a workable and a very good one. I might take some.
Use comma correctly in your next homework answers. Overall, great job!
-T. Donna~
>> I am improving my habits as follows:
1. I have changed eating orders that I eat in odds vegetables, protein and carbohydrate food.
>> 1. I have changed eating orders that I eat oddly like vegetables, protein, and carbohydrate food.
2. I eat increased rate protein on the meals.
>> Correct!
3. If I eat a lot I will not eat the next meal.
>> Correct!
Or: 3. If I eat a lot, I will not eat the next meal.
Or: 3. If I eat a lot, I will not eat the next meal.
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