To Jade
학생이 쓴 원문
In the park, some people taking a walk, some people play the ball game, and reading a magazines and news papers. The sun was shining , very good weader.
Everyone are very exciting.
강사 첨삭
[이름],
I’m glad to see our homework uploaded here.^^
It is a bit short though. We’ll do the same thing on the next Journal, that’s on page 44.^^
Check the grammar Corrections that I’ve done for you.
Great day^^
Corrections:
In the park, some people taking a walk, some people play the ball game, and reading a magazines and news papers.
>> At the park, some people were talking while walking, some were playing games, some are reading magazines and the others are reading news papers.
The sun was shining , very good weader.
>> The sun was shining and I think it is a very good weather.
>> It was a very good weather, the sun was shining.
>> It was a beautiful, sunny day.
Everyone are very exciting.
>> Everyone was excited.
T. Jade
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