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2010-10-19 · 첨삭 강사 Monica

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, Jane. I had waited your call this morning, but the phone didn't rang. I heared it from your manager that it was a huge typoon there. Are you Ok? I hope you are fine. I'd looked forward the class because I had a question. haha:) To tell the truth, today, I'll have a meeting with my boss, the president of my company. But It's my first time to meet someone in a bussiness manner. So I wanted to listen to your advices. But your manager told me that say 'my pleasure to meet you!', so you don't have to sorry for me. (That's OK!) This is a letter for you and also a composition. Please correct the errors in my composition :) Have a good day and take care of you! Bye!

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! I’m okay. Don’t worry about me.  Oh, I’m sorry that I wasn’t able to give you advices about your meeting. I would love to hear how it went though. Tell me about it tomorrow okay? Don’t worry too much, I’ll be fine here. Take care! Bye! Hello, Jane. >> correct I had waited your call this morning, but the phone didn't rang. >> I had waited for your call this morning but the phone didn’t ring. I heared it from your manager that it was a huge typoon there. >> I heard from your manager that there is a huge typhoon there. Are you Ok? >> correct I hope you are fine.>> correct I'd looked forward the class because I had a question. haha:) >> I was looking forward to the class because I had a question. Haha. To tell the truth, today, I'll have a meeting with my boss, the president of my company. >> To tell you the truth, I will have a meeting today with my boss, the president of the company. But It's my first time to meet someone in a bussiness manner. >> But it’s my first time to meet someone in a business manner. So I wanted to listen to your advices. >> So I want to hear your advices. But your manager told me that say 'my pleasure to meet you!', so you don't have to sorry for me. (That's OK!) >> But your manager told me to say “It’s my pleasure to meet you!”, so you don’t have to say sorry to me. This is a letter for you and also a composition. >> correct Please correct the errors in my composition :) >> correct Have a good day and take care of you! >> Have a good day and take care! Bye! >> correct

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