to Jane
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, Jane.
I had waited your call this morning, but the phone didn't rang.
I heared it from your manager that it was a huge typoon there.
Are you Ok? I hope you are fine.
I'd looked forward the class because I had a question. haha:)
To tell the truth, today, I'll have a meeting with my boss, the president of my company. But It's my first time to meet someone in a bussiness manner. So I wanted to listen to your advices.
But your manager told me that say 'my pleasure to meet you!', so you don't have to sorry for me. (That's OK!)
This is a letter for you and also a composition.
Please correct the errors in my composition :)
Have a good day and take care of you!
Bye!
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! I’m okay. Don’t worry about me. Oh, I’m sorry that I wasn’t able to give you advices about your meeting. I would love to hear how it went though. Tell me about it tomorrow okay? Don’t worry too much, I’ll be fine here. Take care! Bye!
Hello, Jane.
>> correct
I had waited your call this morning, but the phone didn't rang.
>> I had waited for your call this morning but the phone didn’t ring.
I heared it from your manager that it was a huge typoon there.
>> I heard from your manager that there is a huge typhoon there.
Are you Ok?
>> correct
I hope you are fine.>> correct
I'd looked forward the class because I had a question. haha:)
>> I was looking forward to the class because I had a question. Haha.
To tell the truth, today, I'll have a meeting with my boss, the president of my company.
>> To tell you the truth, I will have a meeting today with my boss, the president of the company.
But It's my first time to meet someone in a bussiness manner.
>> But it’s my first time to meet someone in a business manner.
So I wanted to listen to your advices.
>> So I want to hear your advices.
But your manager told me that say 'my pleasure to meet you!', so you don't have to sorry for me. (That's OK!)
>> But your manager told me to say “It’s my pleasure to meet you!”, so you don’t have to say sorry to me.
This is a letter for you and also a composition.
>> correct
Please correct the errors in my composition :)
>> correct
Have a good day and take care of you!
>> Have a good day and take care!
Bye!
>> correct
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