To Jenny
학생이 쓴 원문
how are you ?
hahaha, now i'm very exhausted ...
Are you ok? i wonder of your work shift is in morning?
your call is ranging to me at a.m7
when are you finish work ?
i wonder whether your rhythm is fits on that time
today is a hard day to me
i worked very overtime about 3 hours
i've been working at jewelry trading corp. for 3 months
now our buyers from abroad are staying in Seoul
my office was tied up with them
they are interesting but laborious to me
because automitically i have to give up my time
while they are staying here. you know ....
i guess you sometimes must be tough to live in other country
because you miss your hometown like as me
even though i was tired to work, i never skip my lessons
hahaha, i should try it more, isn't it ?! : 0 bye~ see you later
강사 첨삭
[이름],
I am fine, thank you! ^^ I know that you were really exhausted because I noticed it during the class. These past few classes you sounded really cheerful and energetic. Today is an exception, but I totally understand your situation. There were times when I do dome over time at work and I feel the same way. My shift starts at 5AM (Philippine Standard Time) until 2PM. At first, it was really difficult especially that I wasn’t a morning person. But, I got used to it after a few months. I hope you can survive the remaining days your customers’ stay in Seoul.
Have a great weekend! ^^
XOXO,Jenny
How are you ?
>>Correct.Hahaha, now i'm very exhausted ...
>> Hahaha! Now I’m very exhausted.
>> I am very exhausted now.
Are you ok?
>>Correct.
i wonder of your work shift is in morning?
>> I wonder if your work shift is in the morning. your call is ranging to me at a.m7
>> You call me at 7 AM.when are you finish work ?
>>When do you finish your work?i wonder whether your rhythm is fits on that time.
>> I wonder whether your normal rhythm fits that time.today is a hard day to me
>> Today is a hard day for me. i worked very overtime about 3 hours
>> I had three hours of over time at work.i've been working at jewelry trading corp. for 3 months
>> I’ve been working for a jewelry trading corporation for 3 months now.Now, our buyers from abroad are staying in Seoul
>> Correct.my office was tied up with them
>> My office is tied up with them.they are interesting but laborious to me.
>> There interest in our products is good but it so laborious.because automitically i have to give up my time while they are staying here. you know ....>> It is because I had to give my time up automatically while they are in here.
i guess you sometimes must be tough to live in other country
> I guess it must be tough for you to live in another country sometimes.because you miss your hometown like as me
>> It is because you miss your hometown like me.even though i was tired to work, i never skip my lessons
>>Even if I was tired from work, I never skipped my lessons.hahaha, i should try it more, isn't it
>>I should try harder, right?
Bye~ See you later!
>> Correct.
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