To Jenny

2010-03-19 · 첨삭 강사 Jennifer

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how are you ? hahaha, now i'm very exhausted ... Are you ok? i wonder of your work shift is in morning? your call is ranging to me at a.m7 when are you finish work ? i wonder whether your rhythm is fits on that time today is a hard day to me i worked very overtime about 3 hours i've been working at jewelry trading corp. for 3 months now our buyers from abroad are staying in Seoul my office was tied up with them they are interesting but laborious to me because automitically i have to give up my time while they are staying here. you know .... i guess you sometimes must be tough to live in other country because you miss your hometown like as me even though i was tired to work, i never skip my lessons hahaha, i should try it more, isn't it ?! : 0 bye~ see you later

강사 첨삭

[이름], I am fine, thank you! ^^ I know that you were really exhausted because I noticed it during the class. These past few classes you sounded really cheerful and energetic. Today is an exception, but I totally understand your situation. There were times when I do dome over time at work and I feel the same way. My shift starts at 5AM (Philippine Standard Time) until 2PM. At first, it was really difficult especially that I wasn’t a morning person. But, I got used to it after a few months. I hope you can survive the remaining days your customers’ stay in Seoul. Have a great weekend! ^^ XOXO,Jenny   How are you ? >>Correct.Hahaha, now i'm very exhausted ... >> Hahaha! Now I’m very exhausted. >> I am very exhausted now. Are you ok? >>Correct. i wonder of your work shift is in morning? >> I wonder if your work shift is in the morning. your call is ranging to me at a.m7 >> You call me at 7 AM.when are you finish work ? >>When do you finish your work?i wonder whether your rhythm is fits on that time. >> I wonder whether your normal rhythm fits that time.today is a hard day to me >> Today is a hard day for me. i worked very overtime about 3 hours >> I had three hours of over time at work.i've been working at jewelry trading corp. for 3 months >> I’ve been working for a jewelry trading corporation for 3 months now.Now, our buyers from abroad are staying in Seoul >> Correct.my office was tied up with them >> My office is tied up with them.they are interesting but laborious to me. >> There interest in our products is good but it so laborious.because automitically i have to give up my time while they are staying here. you know ....>> It is because I had to give my time up automatically while they are in here. i guess you sometimes must be tough to live in other country > I guess it must be tough for you to live in another country sometimes.because you miss your hometown like as me >> It is because you miss your hometown like me.even though i was tired to work, i never skip my lessons >>Even if I was tired from work, I never skipped my lessons.hahaha, i should try it more, isn't it >>I should try harder, right? Bye~ See you later! >> Correct.

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