to Jessie.
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Good afternoon!
Thanks for finding time to complete your homework.^^
I am but uncertain if my interpretations are more or less correct. Please correct me if I am wrong.^^
I made/provided some modification below, so please check them out.
If you have questions, please raise them during our class.
Again, thank you!
See you!^^
it is my daly home work~
>>This is my daily homework.
A. Is there anything you need to or want to buy?
yes, I have the thing is stand desk.
because I spend a lots of time on chair for work.
>>Yes, I have something that I want/need to buy and that is a stand desk, because I spend lots of time on my chair for work.
so i am getting pat to lower body than uper body.
>>So I am getting more fats in my lower body than my upper body.
how can be it is fine.T_T
>>How possible if may be, it is fine.
anyway do you have anything need to or want to buy?
>>Anyway, do you have anything you need to or want to buy?
B. Do you think invasion of privacy is the price
celebrities have to pay in change for popularity?
yes. i agree with that some of part.
>>Yes, I agree with some parts of it.
people see them and take direct influence.
>>People see them and take their direct influence.
so they need to do every thing caerfully.
>>Correct [spelling check: carefully]
but they are person too.
>>But they are persons/people too.
they have human right such as other people.
>>Correct
OR >> They have the same human rights as other people.
ordinary people are have to care theirs private life
for some body life.
>>Ordinary people have to care for their private life for somebody\'s life.
how do you think?
>>What do you think?
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