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2014-12-18 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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it is my daly home work~ A. Is there anything you need to or want to buy? yes, I have the thing is stand desk. because I spend a lots of time on chair for work. so i am getting pat to lower body than uper body. how can be it is fine.T_T anyway do you have anything need to or want to buy? B. Do you think invasion of privacy is the price celebrities have to pay in change for popularity? yes. i agree with that some of part. people see them and take direct influence. so they need to do every thing caerfully. but they are person too. they have human right such as other people. ordinary people are have to care theirs private life for some body life. how do you think?

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon!

Thanks for finding time to complete your homework.^^

I am but uncertain if my interpretations are more or less correct. Please correct me if I am wrong.^^

I made/provided some modification below, so please check them out.

If you have questions, please raise them during our class.

Again, thank you!

See you!^^

it is my daly home work~
>>This is my daily homework.
A. Is there anything you need to or want to buy?
yes, I have
the thing is stand desk.

because I spend a lots of time on chair for work.

>>Yes, I have something that I want/need to buy and that is a stand desk, because I spend lots of time on my chair for work.
so i am getting pat to lower body than uper body.

>>So I am getting more fats in my lower body than my upper body.
how can be it is fine.T_T
>>How possible if may be, it is fine.
anyway do you have anything need to or want to buy?
>>Anyway, do you have anything you need to or want to buy?
B. Do you think invasion of privacy is the price
celebrities have to pay in change for popularity?
yes. i agree with that some of part.

>>Yes, I agree with some parts of it.
people see them and take direct influence.

>>People see them and take their direct influence.

so they need to do every thing caerfully.

>>Correct [spelling check: carefully]
but they are person too.

>>But they are persons/people too.
they have human right such as other people.

>>Correct

OR >> They have the same human rights as other people.
ordinary people are have to care theirs private life
for some body life.
>>Ordinary people have to care for their private life for somebody\'s life.
how do you think?

>>What do you think?

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