TO Joan

2012-01-17 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Hi Joans long time no talk(?) These day, I'm always prating to something around me for my university entering. I'm so sad. My face is smile but my heart is crying. Do you know about this feeling? I have to enter the university which I want. But the university is higher than my garde. My new year's wish is just entering the university. Can you pray for me, joan? these are my answers. noun phrase : the Refisterar's office verb pgrase : check the office doors prepositional phrase : seeking my grade / in the approproate buildings

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Hello [이름]^^ Oh, is that so? Well I understand how you feel, all you have to do starting from now is to keep doing your best so you would reach your goals one day at a time. Little by little you\'ll work things out differently and you\'ll see how much that effort every day would count for your future. You\'re still young and there are lot of things more to experience, just take time and enjoy! T. Joan Hi Joans long time no talk(?) >> Hi Joan, it has been a long time since we had our talk.These day, I\'m always prating to something around me for my university entering. >> These days, I\'m always praying for something around me to enter university. I\'m so sad. >>CORRECT!My face is smile but my heart is crying. >>My face is smiling but my heart is crying.Do you know about this feeling? >>Can you understand what I feel? I have to enter the university which I want. >>CORRECT! But the university is higher than my garde. >>But the university requires a higher grade than my grade. My new year\'s wish is just entering the university. >>CORRECT!Can you pray for me, joan? >> Could you pray for me, Joan.these are my answers. >>These are my answers.noun phrase : the Registerar\'s office >> CORRECT! OR >>Verb phrase: tried callingverb pgrase : check the office doors >>verb phrase : check the office doors OR >>Noun phrase: the receptionist prepositional phrase : seeking my grade /in the approproate buildings >>Prepositional phrase: in the appropriate buildings  

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