To.Joey

Hi Joey! I'm sorry to didn't homework. I should do homework before went to play game. Anyway, I was very satisfied with my new pants. It is made wool but thin. So It is very comfortable and cool! And yesterday, I played game for 7 hours. This match was over at 2 AM. Usually, I'm not competitive person. But when I play this game, I have a high competitve spirit. Beside, we played game after long time, so It seemed like a war. I pushed button in full strength and I shouted the whole time. After ended the game, I can't move left arm. So I washed my face using right arm only. I was exhausted. And I didn't go to library. I sleeped again after we talk. But yesterday was very fun.

Hi [이름]!   I'm glad you took your break from studying. I'm so happy you had fun!   Anyway, here are my corrections:   Hi Joey! I'm sorry to didn't homework. >>> Hi Joey! I'm sorry I didn't do my homework.I should do homework before went to play game. >>> I should have done my homework before I went out to play the game.Anyway, I was very satisfied with my new pants. >>>Correct!It is made wool but thin. So It is very comfortable and cool! >>> It is made of wool , but it is thin. It is very comfortable and cool!And yesterday, I played game for 7 hours. This match was over at 2 AM. >>> And yesterday, I played the game for 7 hours.The match was over by 2 am.Usually, I'm not competitive person. >>> Usually, I'm not a competitive person.But when I play this game, I have a high competitve spirit. Beside, we played game after long time, so It seemed like a war. >>> But when I play this game, my competitive spirit becomes high. Besides, we haven't played this game for a long time, so it seemed like war.I pushed button in full strength and I shouted the whole time. >>> I pushed the buttons with my full strength and I shouted the whole time.After ended the game, I can't move left arm. So I washed my face using right arm only. >>> After the game, I cannot move my left arm, so I washed my face using my right arm only.I was exhausted. >>> Correct!And I didn't go to library. I sleeped again after we talk. >>> I didn't go to the library. I went back to sleep again after our class.But yesterday was very fun. >>>Correct!